Copywriter | Yi Xing
Editor | Nanfeng
The first shot of the summer season Misty Theater, " misplaced " finally ushered in the finale.
I couldn't help but take out my pocket and spend some money on the screening. After reading it, there were only four words -
inexplicable .
Although it doesn't seem to be a big hit, there is no doubt that "Dislocation" can be regarded as a suspense drama that has been broadcast well in Taochang this whole year.
When the ancient puppets next door were booming, the popularity of "Dislocation" remained high, the discussion was always high, and the video platform frequently refreshed the screen.
has even won the Japanese crown for online dramas on the entire network six times in a row.
just clicked on the comment area. It seems that everyone has the same opinion.
The whole story is as bland as water. At the end, almost every key story line is illogical. The character design has no highlights. It doesn’t matter if there is no twist. There is nothing at the end.
I think viewers who haven’t seen it may be a little curious. How bad is the ending? Even after watching Ma Yili plus Tong Dawei can’t be saved -
Even if you watch the beginning, you can get a rough idea. It turns out that Gu Jiming, played by Tong Dawei, is the real murderer who must be caught in the end.
It turns out that Gu Jiming had a good-looking girlfriend when he was down and out. His girlfriend happened to be the service staff of the hotel where Tang Xun (Wang Jinsong) lived.
Under the strong persuasion of her boyfriend, she copied six pages of the short plot she wrote and brought it to Gu Jiming. After the second creation, it became a best-selling novel "Black Rain".
However, his girlfriend at the time strongly objected to Gu Jiming finishing the book and publishing it, thinking that it was plagiarizing the work of the great writer Tang Xun.
At the same time, Gu Jiming found Jurchen Zhen, a wealthy family, so Gu Jiming considered it again and again.
took him directly to the wilderness and stabbed him several times to kill him.
At the Zhenzhen wedding, after the two people said their vows to each other, the police took Gu Jiming away.
While the pregnant Zhenzhen was still preparing to give birth to the child, the heroine Jiang Guangming decided to divorce and still gave birth to the child.
The whole drama ended at the moment when the child was born and brought over.
Apart from anything else, the ending alone leaves the audience with too much to say.
In fact, the entire drama focuses on Gu Jiming's darkening as the main plot, but the reason for his darkening is really insufficient.
feels that he has never been seen by others, and he is still looked down upon despite his best efforts. In fact, Gu Jiming's emotional intelligence is not high.
After getting the support of the rich girl, he could not kill his girlfriend. The waiter named Jiang Na had no entanglement.
Although Gu Jiming was a little cynical at this time, he really helped him realize his dream. By this time, he was no longer an angry young man, and at least he had a bright future.
What is even more incomprehensible is that Zhenzhen, after knowing that Gu Jiming was a murderer and deceiving her, actually asked to continue the wedding and give birth to the child.
This is simply incredible.
Judging from the plot foreshadowed earlier, in fact, Zhenzhen does not really love Gu Jiming.
She will make it what she wants, and provide whatever the other party likes, and she will always be superior.
It was like the other party had prepared a table of dishes. She didn't listen to what Gu Jiming said at all, and just made a few compliments in an understatement. She felt tired after taking one bite of the piece of meat.
So, would such a person really choose to continue marrying Gu Jiming?
is not a love brain, so it is forcibly arranged to be a love brain.
The other one later lost his self-esteem and insisted on taking someone else’s life. This is too ridiculous.
Although the final ending is outrageous, the various emotional lines and details that have been so lengthy and foreshadowed make people feel speechless.
When you see the end, you will find that the useless plots at the beginning, thinking that there will be a reversal later, are actually useless.
One of them, the deceased Zhang Qing was a pure tool.
After a lot of filming, I think what the audience is most concerned about is the truth about Zhang Qing’s death that was revealed in the first episode.
It was from this person that the rapist, writer Tang Xun and novel author Gu Jiming were implicated.
I never expected that the murderer would be Zhang Qing’s college classmate.
Because he was being sentimental, he felt that Zhang Qing lent him a tissue (he asked for it on his own initiative), and because he was looking at the blackboard in class, he thought he was looking at him.
confessed his love directly in public, but after Zhang Qing clearly refused, this guy pushed his bicycle over, threw away the bouquet, and hugged Zhang Qing in public, and seemed to want to talk. After
was pulled away by security, he was expelled from the school on the grounds of "obscenity".
held a grudge against her, so he killed her directly.
Viewer:?
No, in a suspense drama, can mentally ill (literally, not derogatory) murders be treated as key cases?
Secondly, there are too many coincidences.
In suspense dramas, it is normal to have coincidences, but when coincidences come together, it shows that the screenwriter's skill needs to be improved.
One night, the home of an ordinary female college student gathered together a plumber (rapist), a college classmate (murderer) and a great writer (novel writer).
Is this a bit too outrageous?
Later, Gu Jiming happened to be attending an event with Zhenzhen, and happened to bump into her car getting into a car accident.
After sending him to the hospital, it happened that Zhenzhen fell in love with this man, and his girlfriend "happened" to see him carrying Zhenzhen into the luxury car. This girlfriend "happened" to be a waiter at the hotel where Tang Xun was staying. Copied the manuscript.
Two women died. The logical explanation is unclear and can only be pieced together by "coincidence".
Third, the emotional line has no effect.
To be honest, after watching the whole drama, she really looks more like the heroine, and the real heroine Jiang Guangming's image is too flat.
Obviously, in order to make it fuller, an emotional line was imposed in it.
uses the different emotions faced by the two heroines to write about the tragedy of the fate of the two women.
However, directly deleting the line about Jiang Guangming’s husband has no impact on the story.
The most outrageous thing is that after this guy cheated on her, he found out that his wife was pregnant, and he actually asked her to "move on."
No, buddy, you have cheated on yourself, and you still want to pretend that nothing happened. Why are you getting all the good things in the world?
At the same time, Jiang Guangming and Zhenzhen still have bestie lines. Can you believe it?
The characters in this drama are like several pieces of plasticine of different colors, which are already hardened. The whole work is like the screenwriter trying to squeeze these hardened pieces of clay together with some water. Look. It looks like it really is a whole.
However, whether the police want to deliberately use a trick or they really need to talk, no reason is enough to support these two characters becoming good friends.
Before getting married, Zhenzhen actually asked Jiang Guangming to "help her" just to get married. It was simply outrageous that his father had opened the door for him.
Conclusion
I would like to ask the director of "Dislocation", will making the female character pregnant make you feel that the story is fuller?
Gu Jiming’s murdered girlfriend was pregnant before her death.
The male protagonist didn't need to kill him at first, but in the end he had to kill him brutally like a madman, and even left the murder weapon behind after losing his mind.
is really pregnant.
knew that her boyfriend had plagiarized his works and committed murder, so she married him while pregnant with her child. Her husband was arrested by the police in full view of the public.
Even the heroine Jiang Guangming is pregnant.
Just because of pregnancy, the cheating husband can see hope of relationship recovery. We don’t know what the relationship between cheating and pregnancy is.
No wonder netizens lamented that the show lost a good actor in vain.
In my opinion, Ma Yili and Tong Dawei performed really well, and Wang Jinsong and Lan Yingying were also good. However, after hearing the story at the end, I just felt that it was foggy.
I wonder what you think of the ending of "Dislocation"?
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