Hello everyone, my name is Shen Yi.
Today is the seventh day of the Lunar New Year. The good thing is that we don’t have to rush back to work today. We can still celebrate the New Year happily at home.
But while we are immersed in the atmosphere of the Spring Festival, we must also start to pay attention to one thing: children are about to start school!
Therefore, we can slowly make some simple preparations in advance.
Parents’ preparation before school starts
Parents can simply do these three things:
First, as I said yesterday, parents should read at least three national final examination papers before school starts.
For example, this province/city/Beijing/Shanghai/Wuhan/Guangzhou, etc... From what angle should we look at it? ——Point distribution, question types, reading amount, and writing content.
Second, look at the Chinese textbook for the next semester (there are no physical textbooks, you can search for electronic textbooks online). How to see
?
looks at it from the perspective of theme reading and group text reading . It treats each unit as a group text and looks at the relationship between texts and between each group of texts and writing. For the specific method of
, you can read this article → ()
Third, take a look at the hot spots during the Spring Festival. For example, Spring Festival Gala and Spring Festival movies.
Yesterday I told you about the hot spots of the Spring Festival Gala (see this article for details → ) , Today we will talk about movies, starting with "Hot and Spicy", and talk about writing points related to our Chinese language .
What is the story of "Hot and Spicy"?
A girl was in ruins, and her weight increased to more than 200 pounds. She was extremely fat. Her family ignored her, her lover betrayed and abandoned her, her sister bullied her, and her cousin took advantage of her... These were all her early experiences. Under these encounters, she decided to take action, and then began a counterattack journey of losing weight and boxing. Finally, there is a very inspiring saying: In life, you must win once.
In this story, I have summarized 10 writing points for you.
1. Directly address the issue and discuss the matter.
based on the most superficial and conspicuous context and story of the movie, discussed the matter and extracted the most basic principles and themes.
For example, after the protagonist has worked hard and spent a year to lose 100 pounds and do boxing, we can directly summarize how she created miracles with her perseverance, persistence, and fearless spirit.
We can even use "Hot and Spicy" to say that has grown into . This growth is firstly a physical change, becoming thinner and more beautiful; secondly, she has also grown internally.
We can also take out the Chinese language books for the next semester (there are electronic textbooks online) and combine them to see which articles can be connected with "Hot and Spicy" and see which texts also talk about perseverance, perseverance, fearlessness, create a miracle.
2. From point to point, from effect to cause
In addition to the most obvious inspirational themes, we can also tell the story of the protagonist's experiences from point to point.
For example, someone deceived her and ignored her, which caused her to rebound when she was particularly stressed. This is actually about the relationship between individuals and the environment.
Especially students from the fifth grade to the third grade of junior high school, you will definitely face the impact of the environment on people. When we encounter the adversity of the hostess public in "Hot and Spicy", what should we do? How do we respond to the environment? This is a question that children over 8 years old can think about.
can also trace the cause from the effect, look for the reason behind a person's performance, and write from the perspective of cause and effect.
3, "taken out of context"
"taken out of context" is originally a derogatory connotation, but I added quotation marks here to actually make everyone think about a work from another angle.
I personally think that the movie "Hot Hot" is okay overall, but in terms of its value and significance, I don't think it is a very good movie, and I can even see many of its shortcomings.
For example, its causal relationship, dialectical relationship, and character motivation are a bit weak;
For example, I saw it from the movie, which actually conveys a not very good idea, just because a person is fat, everyone bullies her; Because she lost weight, she won.
I am particularly afraid that after watching this movie, everyone will think that being fat is wrong and being thin is right.
Have you ever felt that you have some weaknesses in your life? For example, you feel that you are a little fat, a little short, have a little hair, and your voice is a little ugly...
I believe that students will feel that they have something particularly outstanding, but at the same time Maybe there is also a little regret, thinking that I wish I was somewhere better... It's not even a little regret, many people are deeply troubled by some problems.
When you have these problems, it does not mean that we should treat it as a big deal. We must accept ourselves in our hearts and then move forward little by little towards the goal.
Because whether you are fat or thin, life is meaningful; whether you lose to others or win against others, it actually doesn't matter. The theme of the movie says, "You have to win once in life." It doesn't necessarily mean winning over others, but winning in your own heart.
4. Using points to bring face to face
Using dots to bring face to face is starting from Jia Ling’s story and extending it to yourself to see what you want to win.
We don’t necessarily have to follow Jia Ling to lose weight, but we can have our own goals and dreams, such as what grades we want to achieve next semester, how long we want to learn to draw, how we want to improve our work and rest, and insist on doing it every day. What time should you get up, for example, how many pages of books should you read or how many words should you memorize in a day? ...This is thinking from point to point.
5, Looking at the essence through phenomena
means that we must understand what is truly good through this story.
For example, the protagonist has grown through weight loss and boxing, allowing himself to understand what real winning is and what real strength is. And learn to love yourself instead of craving and relying on the love of others to survive.
6. Use the environment to set off the character's mood
Just like in the movie, Le Ying was treated maliciously at the recording site. She went home in despair and went upstairs one by one. The lights behind her went out one by one, and at the same time there was a storm outside. We can learn how to write environment rendering.
7, The narrative must be detailed and brief.
Writing is like a movie, it must be detailed and brief.
The year that Le Ying lost 100 pounds and practiced boxing hard was only covered by a set of fast-flash training shots; her first official match is not only the climax of the movie, but also the highlight moment of the protagonist, occupying a large part Proportional length.
8. Don’t insist on a perfect ending
Leying fought against professional players and lost unexpectedly; but for Leying herself, being able to persist in playing the whole game is a victory.
9. Sublimation of emotions and themes
Two apples, should you give them to your friends, the big one or the small one? ——"It depends on your mood." In fact, it tells us to learn to love ourselves and reconcile with ourselves.
10. The most important thing in writing is truth.
"Le Ying", when read together, is "Ling", which is Jia Ling's own name. This is also the "Fan Qie" phonetic notation we mentioned before. If you understand this, you will understand this movie. In fact, it is Jia Ling who is telling her own story; Leying’s weight loss of 100 pounds is not Jia Ling’s own real weight loss experience.
and above, these are 10 points that can be learned from the writing of this movie.
Then next time we don’t evaluate "Hot", we evaluate "Flying Life 2", or even these movies, we talk about songs and texts, such as Sima Guang smashing the vat, we can still use the above 10 points Come to the writing point.
The most important thing is not the material, but mastering the analysis method.
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The first source of this article: Public account-Reader Shen Yi
