10 Criticisms of "Amazing Girl"

"Alizard Girl" is a science fiction/animation film directed by Hitoshi Tamamura and starring Tomoyo Kurosawa/Lynn/Nao Higashiyama. It has carefully compiled some audience's film reviews from the Internet. I hope it will be helpful to everyone. .

"Akanki Girl" film review (1): A masterpiece destined to be buried

With the end of the animation, the mobile game of the Akane Girl will soon be closed, and the sales of the animation are even rarer. I took a look at the ratings of various websites, bgm6.4, Douban scored insufficient number of people, AniDB score 4.5, MAL score 6.6, whether it is sales, popularity, or word of mouth can be described as horrible, it is not an exaggeration to call it a failure. Moreover, the ending is still digging holes and not filling them. The word-of-mouth accumulated in the previous stage is now all verbal criticism. It's just such a seemingly useless work, but it speaks in a different way from the script, concept, theme and thought. Although 2d painting has various collapses, the funds are spent on the blade, and there are many bright spots in the fighting part and emotional rendering. I chased it down in October and had a soft spot for this work. I hope that when someone searches for this term in the future, they will not be biased by the poor scoring, and will not be dissuaded by the painting that collapsed at the beginning. This is an animation worth watching with patience.

"Azalea Girl" film review (2): Tomorrow will bloom into today

The end of 18 years is destined to be an extraordinary ending. After becoming you, Leeds and Blue Bird, I did not expect to see the Akira girl bring me like this Fan of great surprise.

I am a person who can't stand the temper, and can't stand the rhythm of waiting for an episode every week. So always wait until the end of each quarter to watch the fan you want to chase in one breath, and keep the speed of one drama every night in succession. The final general, the maid next door, the vampire Sophie, Anima yell, Morning glory and Kase , Comic Girls, Saga, Moon Shadow, Leeds and Aoto after chasing, feel that they have collapsed. And I started watching Akaneiro when I decided that the final general and the blue bird were the best of the year and were unsurpassed. The first two episodes felt good in the second episode~ it's the fighting episode again~ I also have a dark blue Walkman like this in high school, and then give it away Gave first love. When I was in college, I had another CD, the same dark blue, which was given to me by ex last year. Although it now seems that these are very outdated items, I always have a soft spot for old objects, and I hope they can like the personal objects that were inseparable from me. Since the title of

tape and CD walkman prototype

is added to the finalist, then I want to start with the themes discussed by Akane and the finalist, and talk about my feelings about the show.

These two October new episodes have chosen a similar background event for in-depth interpretation-the loss of a loved one. Dengzi lost her sister, and tomorrow's brother lost her brother. In the face of disasters, humans often have some emotional reactions, such as fear, helplessness, anger, repeated memories, disappointment, and hope. That kind of pain is like an incurable disease that will not kill you, but has a powerful evil force that ravages your already battered heart at all times. It may have changed your life and will never be found again. You are familiar with the life trajectory you like, like a place where your body has been seriously injured. In any case, it is impossible to restore the previous smooth and complete appearance.

Dengzi and Tomorrow are facing the sudden catastrophe, even the choice is the same, deceive themselves, deceive everyone, and then become the one who has disappeared and continue to live with their lives. But how can it be so easy to try to confuse the past with this kind of deception? ! The two of them live in the punishment of themselves every day, and can only live by constant self-paralysis.

Tomorrow confessed in a conversation with Lolita: “I’m a liar, my brother cried for a long time after he disappeared, but the tears I shed were not because of the sadness of losing my brother, but to make everyone feel that it’s not my fault and that I was A poor child, this is the real reason. At first I didn’t realize it, but one day I suddenly found out. So I began to hate this kind of self from the bottom of my heart. So I think I must accept punishment for this kind of self. I and I should not be punished for crying only for myself today."

Dengzi talked with Yu's riverside, and Yu said: "Although it is good to be a perfect sister, the elder sister is trying to force herself! Be a normal self, even so, there will surely be many people who still like seniorsyou. "Dengzi said: "I don't want to be said that when I die!" Everyone likes my sister, and of course I am too. Unable to accept her leaving, unforgivable. I want to replace my sister. If I act like my sister, everyone will be happy and say that I am special. Although it is very comfortable to return to your ordinary self in front of you, you can't give up the special self in front of everyone. "The strong psychological suggestion of

has caused them to lose themselves more and more. Who am I? Am I the one in the eyes of others? The perfect sister who strives for the best in everything, works hard, and never gives up. (Brother)? The chaotic sense of self-identity pressured the lamp to be unable to easily show the fragile and helpless side, until Yu appeared. Tomorrow frame with strong self-blame for the lying self, also under the excellent confession, dare to face the inner heart. Choosing, setting aside the past and bravely opening up a new life. So the name Yu (you) is really a little angel!

Akane also awakens through everyone's self-cognition, from Chloe represents loneliness, fear of losing is difficult The established relationship, Meiya’s desire to be a hero, Nana’s rebellion, and easy compromise with herself, expressed that under the stereotype of society, every girl has a defined life. In a society dominated by men, everyone just wants to see To the soft and lovely you, not the strong and independent you. Maybe you want to resist, but then you find that it is easier and more efficient to use your lovely appearance to behave in the world than to resist. This is the girl in society. In the status quo of survival in the middle of life, the life of a woman has been written, even if she feels that she can do better and become stronger, but in the face of the mechanism of this world, it is only an error, and will eventually move towards the arranged plot. But everyone countered these absurd definitions with practical actions. Your actions will affect the state of the world. This world will be constantly opened up by our actions, and will not be limited to those old-fashioned ones that people set without authorization. In the plot. We can all choose a completely different life, even if the life I choose is full of unsatisfactory, I will stick to it. My value must be determined by myself. No one can make irresponsible remarks about my future if I am afraid If you change, you can only stay content with the status quo. But our choices will continue to change!

Finally, I will end this review with a declaration of tomorrow-I have all kinds of possibilities, but I take punishment Use as an excuse to deceive yourself, just like walking in the dusk. No longer shirk responsibility and face yourself, your own actions will affect the world. Only by doing this kind of awareness can people be free and get rid of self-blame. Take responsibility, This doesn’t mean forgetting, but sincerely crying for him, happy or not, and living the life of your choice. It’s not about abandoning who you are today and moving towards tomorrow, but being together all the time, because tomorrow will become Today! It must be on the other side of the sky where dusk descends, in my own heart.

"Amazing Girl" Film Review (3): [Pictures of Anime Research] "Amazing Girl": An Artistic Conception Above Common Sense

talked about Many people think of a different world and a self. I attack myself, I beat myself, and I persuade myself, AC Pegasus Ed, and RADIO, who sang affectionately with Shima あみ. , And the untranslatable op sung by MICHI. The whole new show of

may only be Fei Menghe in your eyes The elements of lily, and Sony's full screen hard wide. The plot is still a bit incomprehensible. It seems that the level of prime-time animation is quite missing, and there seems to be no merit other than openly issuing benefits in prime-time. Especially in the plot, the main line surrounding Tomorrow's frame and oneself, and the dark line of finding the younger brother were not clearly explained in the ending, and they seemed to be blamed.

But from my personal point of view, this drama is indeed a magical drama. Although it can't catch up with the dark horse of Saga in production, it is worthy of millions of broadcasts. Starting from the plot today,

will briefly explain the artistic conception of "Alkane Girl" beyond common sense.

First of all, we know that from the perspective of the plot, the setting is that there are many parallel worlds in the world, and parallel worlds are produced every day, and parallel worlds are destroyed every day. The heroine Mingrijia and the wireless research staff of Xiaoxue Middle School accidentally discovered the existence of other parallel worlds through radio experiments, so they broke away from ordinary life and gradually moved on to the road of self-awakening. Here I, as a scientific person who has some contact with radio, sees that the ground is almost wet, okay, as a person in the science and technology circle, I can see my professional related content in anime.It’s nice to see someone in the group working on the same project as us. Akane Girl is a goddess

for audiences with a certain degree of scientific cultivation, or is it a plot. The difference is that the environment and people's circumstances in different worlds are completely different. The only thing that is the same is the person's appearance and name and this one. The world is like Ping today, the younger brother who somehow disappeared at the age of 6. Speaking of the name of tomorrow and today, I have already automatically thought of a miracle from a long time ago, another miracle, "The Story of a Poor Sister", an animated miracle adapted from a book.

By the way, this tenth anniversary book is available in PDF stock here. After the completion of the Chinese version, the dpi image format Chinese version will be shared free of charge. In the plot of

, ​​the Yamada’s mother died young, and the younger sister died of illness shortly after giving birth. The father dragged the sisters and owed huge debts due to company affairs and couldn’t bear to drag the sisters to work alone to repay the debts. Only my sister today and my sister will depend on each other tomorrow, living a life of material poverty but rich in spirit.

The protagonist is named after tomorrow and today in "The Girl of Akane", which also means some tribute. By the way, the pronunciation of Asuka and Asuka is the same. I won't say anything to pay tribute to everyone. In short, the brothers and sisters who were born in the same year are still siblings named after today and tomorrow. The old people who really love animation works can immediately appreciate the artistic conception. By the way, in general, you like to set the girl as the older sister to prevent the older brother from bullying the younger sister. Instead of taking the birth order as the actual reference object. The biggest legacy that

left to me is not the jk service of tomorrow, nor the RADIO that I often listen to, but Sony. Whether it is a Walkman or a headset, or a Sony notebook that was broken and repaired a long time ago.

In addition, I have seen AC Pegasus. I have seen the original Ed. I personally think that the picture of flying over the horizon and the glitzy world with a perfect body does not have any description of sex. If you want to download the original Ed of welfare, I will be disappointed. On the contrary, this kind of picture also expresses the process of Tomorrow's getting rid of the shackles of the heart and becoming a real person after going through this series of things. From the perspective of the plot, when everyone gains the ability to transform, a tape will appear, and when this tape is used as a part of the transforming props, it also records the voice of a person, and expresses their inner heart by getting rid of the constraints of the outside world. Heartfelt. Take Mia as an example. As a well-trained family, Silverstone also expects her girl to become a lady-like lady. But Sylvie, bah, Mia didn't think so. Compared to the elegant lady, Mia actually yearned for a heroic life more in her heart. I believe you will be passionate about this episode after watching it. In fact, it is not only passionate, but Mia will unanimously identify it as a god collection. But in the future, the plot will return to the esoteric style. So when the final score is reached, I can hardly bear to look directly at it. In short, the plot of

is such an advancement one by one, until the time when it finally pushes itself to tomorrow, it is no longer understandable.

"Obviously the whole text is exaggerating the feelings of tomorrow's frame and the serious frame, but in the end, the serious frame didn't show up."

"In the end, how can I change the style of the painting casually and talk about it? The younger brother didn’t find it at the end. "

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Okay, in fact, the ending is a bit sudden. Quite Eva's style, but it is not Eva's kind of pornography that the author is purely trying to avenge the society. First of all, it is serious to adopt the method of war to save one's own world from being destroyed, but once the war is launched, it is difficult to turn back, and the war itself is that the soldiers are not tired of deceit, and if they are careless, they will lose everything. Fortresses are often destroyed from within, and animations are very faithful to reflect this reality. What's more, how do you start a war when the enemy you face is yourself? One's greatest enemy is oneself. When facing oneself, it is obviously impossible to use physical means to strike. Therefore, the wartime mobilization strategy adopted by SZJ will definitely fail. It is only a matter of time. Only pay attention to the form, and forget that the real power comes from within. The soldiers trained are used to give heads away, and the only combat power in the world is still himself, so Xiao Huang You will sneer at what he did. In fact, Huang You has provided many help behind the serious salvation activities., Transmit the protagonist group to the world most suitable for them, inspire their selves, make them truly autonomous people, at least step by step from the plot to strengthen the combat effectiveness. With foresight and strategizing, it can be seen that Huang You is by no means idle. I think it is a real pity that the game is suspended and there is no second season. The plot does not explain Huang You's life experience. I am afraid we will never know this.

It is obviously foolish to be an enemy when facing yourself. After successfully saying that the King of Twilight Tomorrow, because the purpose of saving the world has been completed, there is naturally no reason for Severe to show up. All you need to do is to prove your existence in the plot. After all, it is impossible to work part-time. It is impossible in this life. Tomorrow’s Miso is so delicious and nice to speak. I really like this one. As for the Tomorrow's stand that turns the tide with one's own power, naturally, there is no need to sway in the saved world, to be welcomed as a hero, and to hide merit and fame. It's better to meet each other than not to meet, that's the reason.

In fact, from the perspective of their settings, they should have lived a life-like life like the light tone, but under the pursuit of science, they became heroes who saved countless worlds and people by accident. It is a sci-fi romance in itself, just like "The Wandering Earth".

Finally, we can make different explanations about the younger brother. Regardless of whether the younger brother did exist before, in short, he is indeed gone now. One possible explanation is that Tomorrow could not accept the fact that his brother died, so the ptsd barrier appeared, thinking that his brother was still alive, but was missing. This can be reflected in the Cowboy Tomorrow's confession in the Western episode. As for the more bizarre explanations, such as the fact that the younger brother does not exist at all, and the only-child-to-be-to-be-separated personality, this kind of explanation beyond common sense will not be mentioned. In short, reality does exist, and art comes from life. Before, there was an appraiser who was engaged in a related industry with a good writing. I suggest you take a look. The public name is Soul Dolphin Bay.

In short, as the 20th anniversary commemorative animation of "The Girl of Akane", its profoundness cannot be taken for granted. It is more often for us to think. For example, in the world controlled by Ai, people are completely physically separated and become slaves to mobile phones. Once Ai evolves into self, it will begin to enslave human beings. This kind of thinking is inevitable. The producer just wakes up the dreamer in the form of animation. The amount of information in the animation is still very large. It is recommended that you take a closer look at the animation itself and then use your own thoughts before you believe in the random reviews on the Internet. Awakening yourself is the most profound meaning this animation will bring to us.

"Amazing Girl" Film Review (4): The failure of the commercial war, the spirit of the main creative animation!

Today's Ruixue dyed the surrounding area of ​​residence into a silvery white. The silver world is beautiful, but not practical. It's not convenient to go out, and it's a bit more chill than usual. Throughout the ages, extravagant rhetoric has been used to modify and describe, expressing the world wrapped in silver is known as literature and art, knowing life. There are also various colors of natural gifts in the world, such as the cherry blossoms in the spring, the fresh green in the mountains in early summer, the ultramarine in the cloudless night, and the red when the saury and crab are the most plump. At a certain moment, the colors in front of you seem to be the colors of the world. Akane, RGB is 177,53,70 colors respectively, and is described as dark red color. It often appears in the twilight at the time of demons. Although this work is named after Akane, the main color at the critical moment is still gold. Of course, Akane's title naturally has her intention. Next enter the topic. The plan of

is the original intention of animation and mobile game media to promote each other. After the animation is broadcast, the game starts to operate. However, in just 108 days, the mobile game announced the end of operations. Even if the number of people online is small, since the plan is formed, it must be prepared for at least one year. Therefore, it is certain that operators and investors have problems. The confusion of the committee may also affect the announcement of this work and the overseas operation of copyright. Fortunately, the body is spelled out. Why use the word spelling? First of all, the main animation production company DANDELION, this company has no more than ten people, has the most basic outsourcing configuration other than the original paintings, the company atmosphere is very good, and it is good at using digital technology, and is conscientious in the industry The outsourcing company received financing from Toei Animation in October 2018. The problem lies here. It is obvious that this animation company accepts commissioned production, not the main creator. Another nominal cooperative company is called okurutonoboru, which is constructed from the establishment time and dataJudging from it, it may be a short company. Therefore, the capital of the committee is not clear, it can be seen that this work is pieced together, and there are very few funds available for publicity. From the main creative point of view, the general audience might not know who it is to supervise Jen Tamura, because there is no well-known masterpiece. However, audiences who like to study STAFF may still remember him. His shooting and acting skills are quite good, especially in action dramas. His level is very good. Let me give you a few examples, because I don't know which storyboard he painted, so I will just mention a few works. "Invaders in the Six Years", the opening animation is very innovative. "Tan of Heroes of a Failed Knight", which is comparable to the original Long Aotian works of the four great masterpieces, is stunned by the battle lens to make a bloody road. "If only I had a sister", I didn't see much in this movie. He often mingled with Onuma Xin. I used to think that Onuma Xin was good at combat storytelling, but Onuma Xin seldom acted as the main creator of battle films.

From this, it can be inferred that this Tamamura Jen definitely held a lot of work for the main storytelling. However, this person is not well known and has not even served as a supervisor. He is a newcomer supervisor. It can be seen that the main creative has a high degree of freedom. Unless the producer is super insightful, the committee will definitely designate veterans and will not promote newcomers. Later, another main creative series performed by Yuichi Abe. This buddy did an amnesty performance, and Altman basically had him in the mid-Heisei period. The screenwriter Masago Yaskawa is good and experienced. Takutsu Kotaro has written the original case well, and the screenwriter is not so important here, but Yaskawa is definitely a powerful faction. Masawa Katsura and Hiroyuki Asada seem to be well-known, but they are actually very good for drafting. From the perspective of the main creator, these people are all found by the producer, and are not affiliated with a certain company, so there is a high probability that this work was not initiated by a large capital enterprise. But the main lineup is not soft. From the point of view of the movie-watching experience, the roughness of the original character painting is everywhere. Even we found that there is basically one executive storyboard for each episode, and the performance and painting supervision are extremely unstable. This shows that the subcontracting method adopted when making the distribution schedule is also the most unstable, problem-prone, and least planned method. For example, the animation in which the older brother replaced his sister as a novelist during the same period was the most extreme product of the subcontracting system. Based on the above reasons, I believe that this work is a product of small capital investment.

Although there are problems in static painting, the strong strength of the main creator makes this work show more strength than all the originals throughout the year. First of all, from the script analysis, that is, the plot trend. The first episode is the live opening of the campus department, and of course there are five girls. There is no way to label a role in a centralized appearance, and you can't remember it at all. But in order to promote the development of the plot, although enter the topic that can attract the audience. The screenwriter took the usual practice, AP introduced the characters, and BP started the fight directly. After the beginning of the regular chapter, the main task will be launched in the second episode, the progress of the open line. Here, the spice-shaped Nanase Nana is used as a test product and thrown into the parallel world to unfold the story. The first parallel world is the purpose of experimentation. The purpose is to show the audience a worldview, complement the character of the hot girl Nana, and show the inherent pattern of the story process. Therefore, among the several parallel worlds, Nana’s world is the weakest in profile description. Only a glimpse can find that there is a dystopian setting in it, that is, the underage is about to get married, and there are special departments that supervise marriage. It embodies the non-free nature of the marriage system, and extends it to dystopian themes involving the system. Nana's reasons for rejecting marriage are different from what she thought in her heart. The name of the person in the marriage contract is just an excuse, what I want is freedom. What Nana fills in is not self-identification, but freedom. Even if you play with men by your own will in the future, it is also an expression of pursuing freedom. Rather than agree with the mother's dependence on men, and choose such a relaxed lifestyle. The reversal in episode 11, only Nana is untenable, so it is the last to say, the least said. After

Nana, the audience has a preliminary understanding of the plot structure. Isn’t it just to travel to various parallel worlds, find the Evil Cat Star, and summon Linda to fight? This understanding of the audience is confirmed in Mia. The parallel world of Mia is the western world, the open line is to find the dark scene, and the dark line is the embarrassment of the authority. Mia entered the power system from ordinary people, and then broke away from it. It can be summed up as a resistance to the existing system, which embodies her courage. So in the eleventh episode, it was said to her that her own strength is small, unable to fight the whole world, and in the end she will obey the world. In this episode, Mia learned about courage and had the first resistance. She realized the success of the resistance, and she only needed a little external force to go on. SoTherefore, she is also easy to get rid of language constraints and complete self-complement. In the western chapter, the script deliberately creates all kinds of chaos, emphasizing comedy and cheerful characteristics, and also uses orphans and duels to say something, but unfortunately, it ends. This article has an obvious "Kino style" and is also a favorite way of expression for fantasy subjects.

is followed by the most inscribed Kuluoai article, this girl is not gregarious and accustomed to loneliness. The parallel world cooperated with her to create a world controlled by intelligent AI, forcibly diluting and stripping collective consciousness to form individual consciousness. Of course, this theme is also a favorite of science fiction, and a little setting is dystopia. The background setting in this article will not be discussed for the time being. Kuluoai said his heart, not being gregarious is just that he deliberately tried to see if he could adapt to loneliness. When he was immersed in the present, if he suddenly lost a friend, could he return to the state of loneliness before. In fact, it is fear of environmental changes and separation of interpersonal relationships. In fact, of the three girls, her problem is the most realistic and common. The eleventh episode of Teacher Spider’s mental attack is the most effective. But it is easy to dissolve by friendship, of course the story has to proceed like this. However, the ideal friendship is far from being as strong as in the story. If you lose your old bonds, you can actually find new ones. The key is the courage to escape the darkness. Therefore, I think that rather than friendship, the eleventh episode solves the problems of the three people-courage. The so-called friendship and ambiguity of

are not in the three people, but they are actually concentrated in the three people of tomorrow, serious, and excellent. What is the relationship between these three people? From the perspective of love comedy, it is the relationship between the protagonist, the heaven and the childhood sweetheart. This kind of relationship is very interesting, because it also came up with a fourth, Seyou. When you first introduced the characters, Yu was very unobvious. She didn't have a sense of presence after half of her acting, which shows that her role may be crucial. But it can't stand out. The screenwriter is very clever to find the best color, blending it from the first parallel world, playing a suspenseful role. But what's more important is that Seyou has a strong feeling for Tomorrow. At that time, the relationship between You and Tomorrow was not disclosed. This is very important. Even not entering the excellent chapter for a long time, which creates the illusion that you are the ultimate BOSS. And the key episodes 10 and 11, the childhood sweetheart, launched an offensive against the lost Tomorrow, made up for himself, returned to the princess, confessed, and contributed to the climax of the whole drama. Because of Seyou’s paving and walking, the line of You is beautiful and relatively complete. If you only rely on the performance of those two episodes, it is definitely an ordinary superficial article. What's more exciting is the line of tomorrow's frame. The female protagonist C, who has been very optimistic and cheerful from the first episode, has actually been acting in the shadow of Zhang Hong. The clue of the brother's disappearance is hidden, just like You's childhood sweetheart, these two points have never been mentioned directly. I didn't talk about it until later, so the role of Tomorrow frame has always appeared in the form of a mask. After the sky fell, Tomorrow frame slowly revealed its original side. In episode 11, the basic story is over. However, for the sake of tomorrow, I added a whole episode of mouthpieces and memories. From the perspective of the plot, the degree of completion has been improved, and the atmosphere and emotion are also in place, and there is no fault. Even in the mouth cannon, it belongs to the advanced mouth cannon. It's similar to the naked float that often appears at the end of Gundam, or something like that in the future. The overall plot and layout of the

story have a high standard and completeness. The emotional processing of the details is particularly good, and the line design is also good. In an uncommon statement in animation reviews, it is full of talent. Although the original painting is average, the battle of the special style is gorgeous, and the level of the staged performance is very high. The connection of the camera, the position of the move, the release of the killer, etc., not to mention the routines of the full-length animation, the works of ordinary hot-blooded teenagers who are good at fighting are also inferior to the filming and performance. Splitting, performance, and photography are two points. At the end of the tenth episode, when Lolita appeared on the tomorrow frame, the long shot and roundabout could explain the problem. This trick was also commonly used by MADHOUSE back then. Of course, a certain company has used it and the effect is very poor. This group of mirrors is very useful in the evening. In terms of filming, performance, and painting, compared to dry text, let's go to the film to experience it. Not much to say.

finally talked about the music of this work, BGM did not pay special attention. But the key battle part will think of the melody of the theme song, which is more important. The theme song was sung by MICHI. Since the debut of "The Brave of the Six Flowers", it has been developing badly. Although the song rhythm and singing are very characteristic. However, nowadays, anime songs have long gone the way of idols, except for the SM group of people, others are not popular at all. MICHI’s singing skills can’t get in, this song is more than everIt has a heavy feeling and is quite suitable as a combat BGM. The ending song is Ami Wajima, who made the debut of the super lousy movie "Mijia", and her resume is not as good as Michi. Both singers are second-line singers of PONY CANYON. But from the point of view of the soundtrack, it matches the game quite well. So, I said it more than once. Poor go poor, the producer of this game is quite discerning.

I have always said that the unpopularities naturally have reasons for the unpopularities, and there must be some shortcomings. However, unpopular works are not necessarily bad. This work is better than most original works this year. Apart from painting, there is basically nothing wrong with it. This type of work is a work whose upper limit does not reach the level of divine work, but exceeds the standard line. Few original animations can reach the standard line. Besides, there are still such excellent master creators to create. I have the opportunity to introduce this animation company. Their HP wrote very detailed and very interesting.

"Alizard Girl" film review (5): "Alizard Girl": A girl who closed her heart grew up after being injured

"Alizard Girl": A girl who closed her heart grew up after being injured

[AK Talk Animation] "Alkane Girl" finally It’s almost a year since the end, and the BD is also broadcast. It’s time to conclude.

You may also know that my favorite station A 2018 new show is "Azane Girl", although "Saga" is also very good-looking, but we There has always been a heart of "Arabian Girl" in his heart, so this comic has more or less personal opinions and opinions, but we will write as acceptable as possible "Arabian Girl" is Original TV animation launched to commemorate the 20th anniversary of the establishment of the Japanese animation channel ANIMAX. The official plan was announced in March 2018. The animation was co-produced by Dandelion Animation Studio and Ten Characters. The

promotional cover:

Akane Girl-Moegirlpedia Encyclopedia

The Encyclopedia of All Things Can Be Cute

My encounter with me will announce goodbye to the everyday world. The profile of

is also very low-key:

2018, October. The girls who lived in a certain city held a certain ceremony. They are the "Mineral Radio Research Association". It was a club formed by the cheerful girl Tugong Mingrijia and friends from the same high school. This is just a ritual full of urban legends, but under the accidental coincidence of several conditions, it has evolved into a state of affairs that cannot be laughed at. (Official version)

One day in 2018, girls met the "self" in another world——. High school students Tugong Asuka and friends belong to the "Ore Radio Research Association". In a game, they held a "ceremony" following the urban legend. Unexpectedly, the ceremony opened up the parallel world. They stepped into a field that was completely different from daily life, and the door to the new world opened. (Version 2 may be displayed on the chase fan interface)

was actually a coincidence when I was exposed to this drama at that time, because I happened to be the first time in station A to participate in the project, so station A was the first time in a few years. Buying animations also attracted a lot of our interest. At that time, I didn’t like to watch animations. I chose to chase three animations. Among them, "Alizard Girl" is our favorite type-a slightly mysterious plot, with The realm of deep meaning, in addition, there is also the lovely JK who likes to study radio. This can be said to be the most close to our life.

You all know that I am also a HAM, and I still have a certain knowledge of electronic DIY. Of understanding. Although mineral radio had not been done at the time, but after watching a few episodes of animation, I quickly made a lot of them, because I really like this show. Students who like scientific research will resonate more or less when they see the plot.

rock radio:

rock radio is a simple radio receiver consisting of a long wire antenna, a tuner and a detector for selecting the signal frequency. The detector can use crystal ore, detector diode, or germanium high frequency triode detector. Common types of ore that can be used as geophones include lead sulfide, galena, red leadite, chalcopyrite, pyrite (Fool's Gold) and natural copper.

Remember what is the operation of listening to the radio with a crane in [Tualatin Physics Lecture Hall]? Talking about the principle of the crane radio in

, ​​we mentioned the anecdote of the construction site: the crane can be used as a radio, in fact, its essence is a mineral radio.

mineral radio is the easiest to receive.The sound machine is also the first radio communication device to replace the telegraph. It can effectively use low-cost circuits to directly receive AM wireless signals. It does not require power supply.

At that time, I thought that high school students like this kind of thing is very cute, because in reality it is very cute. Few girls are interested in such things. Even in the laboratory where I have stayed, no one understands this kind of thing. Most students can only write codes and a few students who are really doing electronic DIY have no interest in playing radio at all. Teachers only care about money and winning prizes. Students will find a better job in the future in order to use the laboratory as a learning place to gild themselves, and students who actually make various physics experiments will be excluded. The cruel reality makes me more obsessed with animation.

When writing this comic, I was listening to ED’s "Radio" (originally sung by Hideaki Tokunaga, covered by Hejima あみ) over and over again, and felt the emotions in it. (Spoiler alert):

The girls from Xiaoxue University Wireless Research held a "4:44" ceremony in accordance with urban legends. Although they have been returning to the scene without success in the past, the girls came to another world by chance. It is the parallel world. In this mysterious world, there is another heroine—another earth palace tomorrow (serious). There are different possibilities in the

world, and there is a parallel world corresponding to each possibility. In the starry parallel world, the difference between one thought is two worlds. New worlds are created all the time, and worlds disappear in the dusk at any time. In order to prevent the world from extinction in the twilight, you need to fight with the twilight-related forces to protect your world. But in order to fight effectively, you need to get rid of distracting thoughts and reach a state of equilibrium that can balance your own breath. Later, under the leadership of Shenbiren, the girls gradually eliminated the distracting thoughts in their hearts and became real azarre girls.

In the final battle, Tomorrow was surprised to find that it was herself who manipulated the dusk to devour the world. At the age of 6 years, the younger brother of Tomorrow (6 years old) disappeared, causing the heroine Tomorrow’s temperament to change drastically. The Tomorrow (serious) of a different world became the Akane girl who traveled through the vast parallel world to find her younger brother. The Tomorrow frame of a parallel world lost his feelings and accepted the call of Dusk, becoming the killer (dusk messenger) destroying each parallel world.

In the end, the heroine of tomorrow persuaded that she had become the messenger of the twilight and killed herself, who had become the messenger of the twilight, to let go of the past. "Tomorrow will become today". In the end, both sides let go of the past and start their own new lives. The world swallowed by dusk was also saved.

In fact, "Amazing Girl" looks very sci-fi on the surface, the setting is reasonable and there is a sense of Sony in the film, for niche players like us, it is naturally a work that cannot be forgotten in a lifetime, and the characterization is delicate and vivid. The battle scene is gorgeous (how gorgeous is it? Not to mention WEBRIP, even the 1080P of station A will be stuck with mosaic color blocks. The OP transition effect and even the bit rate of the Blu-ray disc are not held, but the same Mosaic color blocks appear in some subtle places), and the voice actors are also top-notch, which is a rare good show. To put it bluntly, I personally think that the level of production is absolutely necessary to beat the Saga of Cygames next door. After all, it is produced by an animation company formed by the old animation company's original Toei Animation CG director, so the level is natural. But I have to say that Akane Girl is not doing very well as a promotional film for mobile games. The plot is difficult for most people to understand and is very small (not a CG pot). The result is that the animation of the mobile game GG (retained stand-alone) eventually did not become popular. But it's not as unbearable as the "unfinished" and "forced stream of consciousness lyric" in the online rumors. In fact, there are only audiences who are not the audience, and there are no bad animations. The audience like the above evaluation is obviously not the audience and forcibly commented without understanding the artistic conception in the plot. If you read the book of SQUEEZECANDYHEAVEN (いちはや), these people are not going to be crazy.

The C-bit tomorrow frame of this film is naturally a well-deserved heroine. After losing his younger brother when he was 6 years old, he resolutely took over his brother’s last wish as the eighth-generation heir of Tsuchiya Misoya (according to the human design map, the seventh-generation heir is the mother, not the younger brother). From then on, he changed his implicit and introverted character and became the one who looks carefree and strong inside.

will be more or less melancholy before the final episode settles the matter down. The younger brother’s disappearance was onlyI'm around, more or less from the outside world, or from the inside. The change in personality is also entirely due to this incident. When thinking of my younger brother, I believe there will be such a melancholy expression on ED BK.

: It is mentioned in the play that the siblings are in the same year, and visually, they are fetuses. The definition of Tomorrow frame as an older sister is naturally a reminder of the

Coral God’s friendship that every pair of dragon and phoenix fetuses are lovers of unfinished predecessors in previous lives. "If I Have a Sister" update reservation

The biggest shortcoming of the final episode accused by others is that there is no straightforward fighting plot, and the heroine will win the battle tomorrow, force the EVA style stream of consciousness, etc... Actually in my opinion The final episode was okay. Regardless of whether the funds are exhausted, I personally don't hate this stream of consciousness style.

Personally think that from a production point of view, it takes a very high level to make the above-mentioned level of stream of consciousness scenes. The production level, although it seems to be cost-saving on the surface, it is not the case. Such an expressive picture like a nightmare is definitely not comparable to the level of EVA for saving money.

did not have a thrilling fight scene, and it was indeed a pity that there was no tomorrow's (serious) appearance, but now it seems that it is a necessary condition for this drama to be an eternal classic.

As an individual who has been severely traumatized, I can fully understand it. This drama is so vigorously depicting the meaning of the role of Tomorrow. When a person encounters major setbacks in reality, unfortunately and frustrated, his inner personality will change under the impact, and it is not impossible to protect himself from the double personality of the solania in "The Sword and Fairy III". I have experienced this kind of change myself, and I often wonder if my current self is still the same personality as my previous self? If it were him, what would I look like now? (For my story, please refer to "I Never Have a Passed Youth")

My current character is definitely not my previous self, I know. Until now, even though no one can threaten me, even when this personality has caused me trouble, I still haven't got out of this strong and crazy personality that changes to protect myself. I know how difficult it is to come out of the trauma of the past and open up my heart. It takes a lot of courage and determination to come out of the past and live a life of my true self. Abandoning the current "me" and retrieving the original "him", I can't do it myself until now. It's not that this "I" is afraid of death after the personality disappears, but that I don't have the courage to change back to that way, and can't bear to be hurt again. In my opinion, this animation of

is to make children believe that frustration is no big deal. No matter how cruel the reality is, you can’t remember it, let alone give up hope (instead of what you said next door can realize your dream if you die. Zombies, alive is the only hope to realize your dream). Only when you open your heart, tomorrow will become today. Live yourself, speak your heart. It’s no big deal to lose a younger brother. We need to respect and accept reality and continue to live tomorrow. If the plot to find the younger brother is designed to force GE, then the plot of this drama so painstakingly foreshadowing is really ruined.

For me, at the moment when Tomorrow is truly letting go of the past and starting a new life, I immediately understood the intention of the producer. Yes, as long as tomorrow still becomes today, today is in our hearts. In the past, in order to meet the suffering, I made my heart stronger and hardened. I live in the personality of today. I will not be forgotten after I return to my original kind and gentle appearance tomorrow. I used to protect myself from the feeling of

who lived today. Those who have experienced it will probably be difficult to understand throughout their lives. As OP sings, when people suffer great suffering, they will indeed create another self with a strong character, arming themselves like a chrysalis. But if you want to break out of the cocoon, you need to struggle non-stop, the process is painful, but it must be necessary. "Alkien Girl" is such a kingly story about a girl who closed her heart after being injured removes the shell to protect her and opens her heart to grow up. This is what it really looks like.

MICHI-ソラネタリウム

[00:13.921]Put your earphones on your hands and hug your knees

[00:19.180]Armed yourself like a worm

[00:30.012]Even if you only see the dull street

[00:35.421] Heartbeat alwaysPursuing the long-awaited sky

[00:45.812] Yesterday’s regrets are still tingling more than

[00:56.377]I have dreamed of destroying today’s dream

[01:01.073]I want to break the cocoon quickly. Struggling and struggling constantly

[01:06.970]The wall of the soul is like a planetarium

[01:12.089]To open the nameless door in the trembling

[01:17.835]I want to admit wounds and love like a butterfly on glass The breeze

[01:22.956] I don’t need the sky that I can only look up at

[01:28.412] I am dormant here, go beyond myself

[01:34.517] That chrysalis has already escaped the insect cage

and ED The lyrics are also very good:

[00:50.344] A young man who is thinking of spring

[00:54.494] grows up

[00:58.149] has been groping for the road

[01:01.864] has not been defiled

[01: 05.787] The decorated road with no exit

[01:09.786]In the crowded crowd

[01:13.458]Please tell me what is the real happiness

[01:17.457]Broken radio

now "Alizard Girl" All the BDs have been released, and I am afraid that this drama will also end there, there will be no sequels, and it will always be in the dust of history. But as long as tomorrow continues to become today, today will always be in our hearts.

After I successfully escape from today and move towards tomorrow, I will always remember the me of today and the "Alkien Girl" that led me to regain myself. From now on, let go of the alienated character to arm yourself and live out your own life again.

Thank you for everything that "The Girl of Akane" has brought to me. Now I am really willing to face the reality and live my life again. I have indeed received a lot of spiritual support from this animation. For this reason, I will treasure the animation forever. I completely received the author’s affection...

"Amazing Girl" Film Review (6): Love is deep, hatred is more intense.

(long text + multi-picture warning) I have been depressed for two consecutive days since the ending on the 17th, yes, depressed. I have always had an indescribable stomachache, because although the ending tells you "everyone is alive, they are all living happily", but they always feel lacking. The main line of

has indeed been demonstrated. The bamboo wheel frame has recognized the future, bid farewell to the past, and completed self-salvation; the surrounding partners have also overcome self-contradictions; the worrying and serious situation has also come to an end. The theme of "Farewell to the Past" was expressed in the last episode of Zhulunjia and Lolita’s “self-confrontation” and self-salvation, allowing an ordinary girl’s battle plot (and mobile game promotion) to rise from the inside out to the new height. However, the secondary line and the foreshadowing remain in the air and cannot be answered. After discussing with friends from Tieba for many times, we came to a consistent answer: from this ending, to the emotional preparation of the whole fan, role positioning, foreshadowing, front and back balance, character relationship, detailed description, and painting, etc., basically It is not a problem of underperformance,

is simply terrible.

So, my dissatisfaction and disappointment after watching the ending completely escalated into anger. All the flaws of

caused an idea and story that could have been written in a big way and became a victim of capital, leading to the collapse of sales and reputation. Not to mention the strong acting skills of voice actors. Kurosawa Pousse is (at least) Hexagonal, and his voice style is very different, and he has no sense of conflict with himself. Because of this, I feel more distressed about the efforts of the voice actors and staff.

Since the ninth episode of the serious frame was swallowed by the dusk, the front and back parts of the whole series showed a "fragmented" state. I believe that the final plot trend has basically deviated from the original idea of ​​hitting.

Now I will discuss the shortcomings of this series step by step from the above perspective.

(The content is based on the analysis of Baidu Tieba’s "burning fireworks", and combined with personal thoughts by the way)

1. The problem of emotional maturation and role relationship

The most serious problem of this work is the structural problem.

storyIt started with the encounter of "Tomorrow frame and Tomorrow frame" (the following is distinguished by "bamboo wheel frame" and "serious frame"), and then through the format of a unit drama to describe the surrounding partners overcoming the demons to achieve a "balanced" state, Seriously, getting acquainted with partners opens up the heart, and Zhulunjia finally recognizes self-choice to go to the future to save the world. And in the middle, from episodes 1 to 9 are the feelings between bamboo frame and serious frame.

The first episode of the two met each other, the fourth episode of Seriously Going to Steal Chikuwajia’s Miso was caught, the sixth episode of two people alone time on the beach, the eighth episode ushered in the climax of the relationship between the two, until the 9th Set the serious frame to die for the bamboo wheel frame. The unit links in the middle are indispensable for the shadow of serious rescue. Even in the 10th and 11th episodes, the serious frame does not appear, this description has not been broken-the bamboo wheel frame "lost half of the body" pain and willing to step into the dusk to save the world and rescue the serious frame. In other words, "Tomorrow frame and Tomorrow frame" are the subjects of the emotional line.

So you also think that these emotional paving in the ending will definitely be rewarded. However, Mao did not. After the animation described 10 episodes of Tomorrow Frame × Tomorrow Frame, suddenly after Yu "confessed" to Tomorrow Frame, the center was pushed to Tomorrow Frame × You.

Judging from the previous description of the animation, we can also know that Yu and Tomorrow are close to each other, and Gongkou You can also reflect this to a certain extent on the degree of Tomorrow’s idiot, but there is no foreshadowing and description. There are so many relationships between serious frames. Put aside the plot first, just watch the op. The entire op is developed around the bamboo wheel frame and the serious frame, so that the other four characters feel like a foil. From the beginning of the encounter in the dusk, to the quick shots of the middle bamboo wheel frame and the serious frame, to the last two standing back to back in the dusk looking up at the sky. No matter how you look at it, you will think that this fan is about the story between these two characters, but that's not the case. After the ninth episode, the role of "Serious Frame" was completely deleted from the story, and all the previous preparations were over. The story originally revolves around the Tomorrow frame in multiple worlds. In terms of importance, the bamboo wheel frame is female 1, the serious frame is female 2, and the Gongkou Yu is female 3. You can only rank fourth. The early description will not give you any feeling that this role will play a major role later. As a non-dominant role in the world, Gongkouyou has a richer role in shaping it. Even if you go to see the fan drama and game posters, or the official four-frame comics, or even the official CD cover, you can't see any special features in the positioning of You. (Ah, by the way, Yu is completely a "lady" attribute in the four grids, and she will not let it go regardless of whether it is a bamboo wheel frame or a serious frame.) In the op, Yuguchi corresponds to the serious frame in red and blue. Symmetric in the opposite direction.

Many viewers would think that this character will play a major role in the final battle, or appear as a powerful villain, but Yukou Yu gave an assist in episode 11 and never appeared again. The same disappeared.

Eryou did not have a high sense of presence in the first half of the show. From the results of the "new fan favorite character" vote initiated at station A at that time, it can be seen that serious frame, Gongkouyou and even Nana are more popular than her. Her role is more about participating and acting as a Tucao. In addition to the setting of the young tame and dye, you can also refer to it. There is basically no emotional description between her and Mingrijia.

So You are just a supporting role. Not to mention the appearance, even the background is rarely explained.

So when all the Baihe Kitchen in episode 11 were excited and excited, those of us who had been chasing fans had a terrible stomachache. The reason was the sense of break caused by this inconsistent front and back. And carefully compare this line before and after, "I like you" is actually very abrupt, because we can only see Yu as a childhood sweetheart for the bamboo wheel frame, and after this sentence, You also sighed "Finally listened." To the true voice of Tomorrow", when the two are fighting, they are also educating Tomorrow to understand the truth of "recognize yourself and take responsibility" instead of "Oh, I like you for so long and finally say that we are together*¥ %&……".

And through the previous foreshadowing, we can also see that the only role in this segment that can bear such a strong emotional output is serious. It is too easy to make up a contradiction between the bamboo wheel frame and the serious frame. The volunteer dispute in episode 8 is the introduction. Therefore, when watching "Dragon and Tiger", the audience can't feel the satisfaction of "Ah~ they are finally together" when Da Ha and Ryu Er kiss when watching "Dragon and Tiger". Instead, they see Da Ha and Shinari at the end. The kind of black-headed question mark that got togetherConfusion. The ideal plot development model can be summarized as the following chain:

five-person group crossing, bamboo wheel frame serious acquaintance → Nana return → Mia return → Koroy return → Uhui → bamboo wheel frame and serious frame main line recovery, HAPPY Although END

looks clichéd, it is reasonable and a complete story. However, the foreshadowing that should have been recovered at the end was advanced to episodes 8 and 9. The complete plot loop was interrupted mercilessly, and the plot went into rampage.

Therefore, after the director told you the story of "Tomorrow Frame and Tomorrow Frame" in ten episodes, he suddenly thought that "Tomorrow Frame and Tomorrow Frame" was also a good idea, and then unexpectedly put You Infinity above your friends. (Actually, it doesn’t count as Lily if you look closely). But the plot was not prepared, and the audience was not prepared. So it's not difficult to explain why there were such posts in the post bar at the time, "praising", "hardcore lily fan" and "Amazing Girl". You are "hardcore" because you caught the audience by surprise, making the audience feel very fresh. But those of us felt that we were fed a bite of flies and waited for nothing.

This is not a fight between frame × frame or frame × excellent CP, because the script itself has fatal structural problems. From this "structurality" of

, ​​we can extend to the next topic: foreshadowing recovery.

2. Foreshadowing recovery problems

Insufficient foreshadowing recovery and broken clues are the most prominent and most criticized problems in this work. The first is the question that can be singled out from the end:

655.1 Takumi, who has passed through the world, is still in a state of "capture home", and Zhulunjia also promised him that the serious stand will come and take him home in the future. Gongkouyou is an important figure in promoting the five wireless researchers to become a balancer. His personal background, purpose and ending state are completely unexplained. Lolita's whereabouts after regaining her prototype, the current situation of her world, and the situation after the dusk subsided, are unknown.

Let me list the details observed from the first episode:

Zhulunjia said at the beginning that he was "the sixth generation heir of the Tugong family", why did he become the "seventh generation" later? Who passed the 4:44 urban legend? Why did the five successfully transfer to 633.1, a completely dusky world? Since the existence of the phenomenon of "bond" and "combination" is mentioned later, why did the bamboo wheel frame not merge with the serious frame of the same frequency when it first crossed? Why does the serious frame appear in a completely dusky world? (I personally understand that it can only be rushed to save people.) In episode 9 of the childhood, the serious fight with younger brother and grandmother escaped. What happened to the parents? After the younger brother disappeared, it is said that grandmother is her only relative, but why is there no mention of her grandmother's condition later? From the end, it can be seen that even the loli frame is interested in bamboo wheel, but why is the serious frame the least interested in bamboo wheel of all the tomorrow frames, but is very enthusiastic about their own miso? The serious voice of "you" does prove that the Yu of every world is close to Tomorrow, but later we learn that the Yu of the serious world has been around for ten years. Can their relationship be so close? ……

and rewinding to some of the basic settings of this game, you will find questions: "Why did my brother disappear", "Why use tapes and CDs to transform and traverse" and "How did Nana learn instantly when they became equalizers? There are so many bunker skills and fights" (stop, why did I even spit out the basic settings, crossed out)

A bunch of unanswered foreshadowings created a sense of emptiness in the audience’s mind at the end, which can better reflect the production team’s right The fan drama is indifferent, and the animations in the front and rear parts are not like the works of the same group of people. The stream of consciousness description in the last episode is very good. The BOSS seems reasonable and reasonable to be disintegrated. Tomorrow frame realizes self-salvation, and the most important contradiction of this work is resolved. However, after the creators resolved the main contradiction, they ignored everything, letting a lot of foreshadowing hang in the air and suddenly entered the post-day talk mode. When the final battle of

was completed, the 12th episode of the animation was about 15 minutes, and the remaining 9 minutes were used to solve some of the most important suspense, which is enough. Even if there are still a lot of foreshadowings that have not been explained, this is enough to satisfy the audience's psychology. What is the supervisor doing? Our production team would rather spend a few minutes talking about how wireless research can absorb new ideas and how wireless research can occupy the school’s broadcasting room. We will never fill in holes, not only that, we must dig new holes. The only few minutes left were filled with unnecessary scenes.

Besides, in general, at the end of the drama, no matter how important the role is, it must be revealed, However, no matter the serious frame, the ergonomics, or the restored loli frame, all disappeared at the end.

Maybe you would say that in the last two minutes, the supervisor gave a serious whereabouts? Regarding the serious situation, this is how the supervisor handles it. Supervisor

thinks this is very advanced and metaphorical. A box of miso, a smile, and a close-up of a serious shelf ornament suggest the return of serious shelf. It is concise, clear and meaningful, Perfect.

I bah!

I have already explained the importance of taking this role seriously. But at the end, the supervisor not only prevented her from showing up, but also replaced her role with a miso box.

And think about it carefully, there is obviously a problem with this approach. The serious return shows that she and her world have been saved. So why didn't Shuangjia come back in the first time and tell her feelings and her so deep Zhulunjia "I'm still alive", and have to wait until Zhulunjia reaches the third year of high school before coming here? Why didn't you meet with her when you came here, to steal the miso to leave a bunch of traces "suggesting" the fact? The two are already in a deadly friendship. After the catastrophe, they only steal a box of miso. Do you think it is possible? So at the end, even if I knew she was still alive, I couldn't be happy.

Even if you take two minutes to reclaim the OP, you can: The bamboo wheel frame ran to the beach, saw the serious frame, and then ran to her crying, the two embraced with mixed feelings. Even if the time is short, this can greatly repair the emotional imbalance, and Takumi's situation is even more self-evident.

However: (Quoting from the original words of my friend)

is serious: "I am alive, but for the bamboo wheel frame that has such a deep relationship with me, I just come back to steal the miso, leaving a lot of traces suggesting that it is me, me That is not to see her, I am anxious to die of you! "

is the same, the production team: "We created a complicated story, which implies that we have a meticulous world view and exciting plot development, but we are one The pits are not filled, not only that, I will continue to dig the pits to death you!" ... I don't want to say anything, in short, let us thank Miss Yan for her love to the audience. A metaphor is inserted at the end of

to illustrate the problem of handling the three scenes of bamboo wheel frame, serious frame, and excellent: I was working in a field, unfortunately, I encountered a large earthquake in the local area, and my life and death were uncertain. The news media reported the incident for the first time. My parents in my hometown were surprised and anxious when they saw it. However, two months later, there was still no news from me. So the parents decided to accept the reality of losing their son and face life again. Fortunately, I survived and finally awoke after being in a coma for two months in the hospital, but I don’t know why. I don’t think I can see my parents at this time, so I secretly ran to the house and took my favorite food in the refrigerator (such as flavor Increased) and the clothes were stolen back to hint at the reality of the parents. And I saw a big article in the local newspaper, reporting the deep feelings between my parents and me. At the end of the two paragraphs, I discovered that the object of description suddenly became my parents and brother-in-law, and I looked like a black man. Question mark...

As for the serious handling problem at the end, the third problem of this work has also been revealed, that is, the problem of detailed description.

3. Detailed description

can be determined that this work has already compressed the animation content "as much as possible" under the limited funds and the short 12-episode length. Many of the contents could be written in a big book, but they were taken over in one stroke, which caused the plot to be unsmooth and the characters' motivations abrupt, and it was also an important reason for improper reclamation.

, ​​for example, the motivational problem of ergonomics mentioned above. This question was raised with the brief dialogue between Shoujia and Gongkouyou at the end of the fifth episode, but the audience never waited to answer. The most obvious thing about

is the change of attitude in the second episode of Nanase Nana's "King Shunzawa". For an idol in a different world, he would rather abandon his family and friends in this world and choose to marry him, and then resist for a more comical reason. This is basically playing the audience as a fool, so most of the audience's interest in the first episode was broken up, and many people gave up chasing the watch. Even if you say that this is due to the "confusion of thoughts caused by the fusion of ties", the audience can accept it, but none. What's more, the "comradeship" created in this way will not be strong in any way. Look at the following chapters of Mia and Koroy, compare the two, and make a judgment. Mia relies on being a sheriff for a day to carry out her beliefs about heroes, and the characters' behavior is more reasonable; and the psychological description of Koroy does not lose the final "stream of consciousness" dialogue. In the wedding chapter,Nana did sublimate herself by forgiving her family, but the character's motives looked like nonsense.

is the same as I mentioned above. The early stage of the animation had serious shortcomings in the character description of You. Even if the audience saw You’s knots and contradictions in the 10th episode, her actions in the 11th episode were also very unexpected. Not to mention the seriousness, the last few episodes of the animation were completely akalinized. The production team is not good enough for a reasonable description, and not serious about a proper ending.

Let's look at some of the bridge segments that should be described in detail in the animation. Compared with the points mentioned above, the severity of the problem is relatively light.

wedding articles. When talking in the cafe, the soft sister frame passed by. After being found, five people chose to escape. The soft sister frame was still surprised. However, when the five people ran into the church, the soft sister frame teleported directly.

Western chapter. The cowboy frame of "caught yourself to rob the bank" seems to have accepted this reality very calmly after everything happened. It did not show the struggle of the two groups of people when facing the death penalty, and finally skipped it as if they had negotiated. ……

Yu and the waiter Yu at the tavern were surprised when they collided. But why is Yu surprised? You just chose to wait outside when you knew that there was a "you" inside. Why did it seem like you suddenly met? And what should two people do after they see it, just like everyone has accepted this setting calmly...

White Goat Chapter. The final treatment of the brainwashed mentally retarded frame is unknown. Speaking of being brainwashed and thrown on a desert island by a person, in the end, the system that can guarantee her supply is also destroyed. Isn't this a very dangerous thing?

Episode 8 The bamboo wheel frame tripped and the coffee seemed to fall. Our serious lady is as light as a swallow, catching coffee in three seconds, avoiding the tragedy. But Ms. Serious Frame, haven't you thought of helping the bamboo wheel frame with such a fast movement? Behind

, ​​grandma's reaction after seeing her daughter become "twins" was just one sentence, "面白いわね"... The family members are very stable. Mom and Dad also accepted the reality very calmly in about three seconds, and everyone suddenly sat down for a meal, and the family members were emotionally stable. In the 11th episode of

, ​​when the arrogant beast leaped on the bamboo wheel frame, the serious knife suddenly fell from the sky. Not to mention how the knife fell, our bamboo wheel frame did not disappoint the audience at this moment, picked up the knife to inherit the serious mantle, and instantly learned how to fight without the transformation bonus and fighting training.

can be inferred that the production team’s strategy is very simple and rude: just think that one crop is one crop, and just follow it down. Since you don't put the audience in your eyes, the audience will naturally not put you in their hearts. Nowadays, animation sales are bleak, and the mobile game will be closed one month later. This is the result of you casually playing the audience and fans.

The audience glanced at it and felt uninterested. Turn it off, and the fate is here. But for the fans who follow the changes every week and analyze the details, their hearts are already dead. If the production team chose to produce animations wholeheartedly instead of two-line combat in animated mobile games, this tragedy might be avoided to a certain extent.

If you have seen the work "Punch Line" written by Taetsu before, you will be more aware of the seriousness of the above three problems. The development of "Punch Line" is less clueless and more neurotic than Akane. In the first episode, the protagonist destroyed the earth twice because of seeing the girl's fat times. The audience in the previous episodes was basically at a loss. Chase Fan under the circumstances. But as the foreshadowing is slowly recovered and explained, the latter half of the animation has been able to make the audience see it with the accelerated pace, until the last episode of the foreshadowing has been recovered and the story has been fully told.

Moreover, the painting of "Punch Line" is very delicate, and there is almost no collapse. 4. Painting collapse

Finally, let’s talk about the collapse of this work. Collapse is also commonplace in every episode. The more you look back, the more problems you can find, and the production of this episode becomes more and more rough. The painting of this work reveals a feeling of insufficient funding and rushing work, and the animation's habit of never giving a preview of the next episode can prove this point. What's more, at that time, the publicity PV only had the first episode. So it's not surprising why the animation plot is out of balance before and after, because time is tight and tasks are heavy, and there is no unified arrangement.

However, the collapse did not reach the next door."Or "Mei Fei Mei", the situation is at least within acceptable limits. Put a few pictures for everyone to experience...

Nana has gradually developed a full giraffe in a strange direction since the second episode. I invented a new word for this situation: Giraffication. If you zoom in, there are miraculous and serious frames. They are all your pots. Look at the bamboo wheel frame and the eyes are not symmetrical. Nana's interpretation of what is "forgotten"

can only hope that the BD version can be corrected in the future. The two-minute plot was also corrected together. If I gave Qian Shao such a prick, you might ask me how much I hate it.

In fact, I like this show very much, like its characters, settings, world, and fights. Especially the OP and ED songs, I think they are the top in the October 2018 show. Because

likes it so much, I will point it out patiently when it shows inadequacy; I will be so disappointed when its ending is so perfunctory. Nowadays, animation sales are violently dead, mobile games are about to be closed, and works that should have been done are destroyed by bad capital operations. Although it had been anticipated a long time ago, to truly accept this reality, the mentality is still 10,000 unwilling. This kind of ending is too unfair for the characters in the animation, the efforts of the staff, for the audience who have supported animation for a long time, and for the voice actors who have contributed such classic interpretations.

It shouldn't be put on a full stop so simply. After the final episode of

was broadcast, I privately wrote to Dayue teacher in the original case of "Xian Shao" on Weibo in English; Guanqun and Bayou also left a message to Dayue teacher through Weibo after the animation and got my own reply, but the answers were very perfunctory . Tayue himself did not understand the production team's later thinking and arrangements.

No matter whether you get it or not, as viewers, we have made all our efforts, including money expenditure, to make this animation better.

should end with the final title.

hope that we can meet again on the other side at dusk.

Thank you for your company.